Part III Chapter Seventeen

chapterseventeen

“mr.rodriguez,what’shappened?”myvoiceishoarseandthickwithunshed

tears.ray.sweetray.mydad.

“he’sbeeninacaraccident.”

“okay,i’llcome...i’llcomenow.”adrenalinehasfloodedmybloodstream,

lea一vingpanicinitswake.i’mfindingitdifficulttobreathe.

“they’vetransferredhimtoportland.”

portland?whatthehellishedoinginportland?

“theyairliftedhim,ana.i’mheadingtherenow.ohsu.oh,ana,ididn’tsee

thecar.ijustdidn’tseeit...”hisvoicecracks.mr.rodriguez—no!

“i’llseeyouthere.”mr.rodriguezchokesandthelinegoesdead.adark

dreadseizesmebythethroat,overwhelmingme.ray.no.no.itakeadeep

steadyingbreath,pickupthephoneandcallroach.heanswersonthe

secondring.

“ana?”

“jerry.it’smyfather.”

“ana,whathappened?”

iexplain,barelypausingtobreathe.

“go.ofcourse,youmustgo.ihopeyourfather’sokay.”

“thankyou.i’llkeepyouinformed.”inadvertentlyislamthephonedown,but

rightnowcouldn’tcareless.

“hanna!”icall,awareoftheanxietyinmyvoice.momentslatershepokes

herheadaroundthedoortofindmepackingmypurseandgrabbingpapers

tostuffintomybriefcase.

“yes,ana?”shefrowns.

“myfatherhasbeeninanaccident.iha一vetogo.”

“ohdear—”

“cancelallmyappointmentstoday.andmonday.you’llha一vetofinish

preppingthee-bookpresentation—notesareinthesharedfile.getcourtney

tohelpifyouha一veto.”

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“yes,”hannawhispers.“ihopehe’sokay.don’tworryaboutanythinghere.

we’llmuddlethrough.”

“iha一vemyblackberry.”

theconcernetchedonherpinched,palefaceisalmostmyundoing.daddy.

igrabmyjacket,purse,andbriefcase.“i’llcallyouifineedanything.”

“do,please.goodluck,ana.hopehe’sokay.”

igiveherasmalltightsmile,fightingtomaintainmycomposure,andexitmy

office.itryhardnottorunallthewaytoreception.sawyerleapstohisfeet

wheniarrive.

“mrs.grey?”heasks,confusedbymysuddenappearance.

“we’regoingtoportland—now.”

“okay,ma’am,”hesays,frowningatmebutopeningthedoor.movingis

good.

“mrs.grey,”sawyerasksasweracetowardtheparkinglot.“caniaskwhy

we’remakingthisunscheduledtrip?”

“it’smydad.he’sbeeninanaccident.”

“isee.doesmr.greyknow?”

“i’llcallhimfromthecar.”

sawyernodsandopensthereardoortotheaudisuvandiclimbin.with

shakingfingers,ireachformyblackberry,andidialchristian’scell.

“mrs.grey.”andrea’svoiceiscrispandbusinesslike.

“ischristianthere?”ibreathe.

“um...he’ssomewhereinthebuilding,ma’am.he’slefthisblackberry

chargingwithme.”

oh.igroansilentlywithfrustration.

“canyoutellhimicalled,andthatineedtospeakwithhim?it’surgent.”

“icouldtryandtrackhimdown.hedoesha一veahabitofwanderingoff

sometimes.”

“justgethimtocallme,please,”ibeg,fightingbacktears.

“certainly,mrs.grey.”shehesitates.“iseverythingallright?”

“no,”iwhisper,nottrustingmyvoice.“please,justgethimtocallme.”

“yes,ma’am.”

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ihangup.icannotcontainmyanguishanylonger.pullingmykneesuptomy

chest,icurlupontherearseatandtearsooze,unwelcome,downmy

cheeks.

“whereinportland,mrs.grey?”sawyerasksgently.

“ohsu,”ichokeout.“thebighospital.”

sawyerpullsoutintothestreetandheadsforthei-5,whileikeensoftlyinthe

backofthecar,mutteringwordlessprayers.pleaselethimbeokay.please

lethimbeokay.

myphonerings.“yourloveisking”startlingmefrommymantra.

“christian,”igasp.

“christ,ana.what’swrong?”

“it’sray—he’sbeeninanaccident.”

“shit!”

“yes.iamonmywaytoportland.”

“portland?pleasetellmesawyeriswithyou.”

“yes,he’sdriving.”

“whereisray?”

“atohsu.”

ihearamuffledvoiceinthebackground.“yes,ros,”christiansnapsangrily.

“iknow!sorry,baby—icanbethereinaboutthreehours.iha一vebusinessi

needtofinishhere.i’llflydown.”

ohshit.charlietangoisbackincommissionandlasttimechristianflew

her...

“iha一veameetingwithsomeguysoverfromtaiwan.ican’tblowthemoff.it’s

adealwe’vebeenhammeringoutformonths.”

whydoiknownothingaboutthis?

“i’lllea一veassoonasican.”

“okay,”iwhisper.andiwanttosaythatit’sokay,hecanstayinseattleand

sortouthisbusiness...butthetruthisiwanthimwithme.

“oh,baby,”hewhispers.

“i’llbeokay,christian.takeyourtime.don’trush.idon’twanttoworryabout

you,too.flysafely.”

“iwill.”

“loveyou.”

“iloveyou,too,baby.i’llbewithyouassoonasican.keeplukeclose.”

“yes,iwill.”

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“i’llseeyoulater.”

“bye.”

afterhangingup,ihugmykneesoncemore.iknownothingaboutchristian’s

business.whatthehellishedoingwiththetaiwanese?igazeoutofthe

windowaswepassboeingfield-kingcountyairport.hemustflysafely...

mystomachknotsanewandnauseathreatens.rayandchristian.idon’t

thinkmyheartcouldtakethat.leaningback,istartmymantraagain:please

lethimbeokay.pleaselethimbeokay.

“mrs.grey.”sawyer’svoicerousesme.“we’reonthehospitalgrounds.ijust

ha一vetofindtheer.”

“iknowwhereitis.”mymindflitsbacktomylastvisittoohsu

when,onmysecondday,ifelloffastepladderatclaytons,twistingmyankle.

irecallpaulclaytonhoveringovermeandshudderatthememory.

sawyerpullsuptothedrop-offpointandleapsouttoopenmydoor.

“i’llgopark,ma’am,andcomefindyou.lea一veyourbriefcase,i’llbringit.”

“thankyou,luke.”

henods,andiwalkbrisklyintothebuzzingerreceptionarea.the

receptionistatthedeskgivesmeapolitesmile,andwithinafewmoments,

she’slocatedrayandissendingmetotheoronthethirdfloor.

or?fuck!“thankyou,”imutter,tryingtofocusonherdirectionstothe

elevators.mystomachlurchesasialmostruntowardthem.

lethimbeokay.pleaselethimbeokay.

theelevatorisagonizinglyslow,stoppingoneachfloor.comeon...come

on!iwillittomovefaster,scowlingatthepeoplestrollinginandoutand

preventingmefromgettingtomydad.finally,thedoorsopenonthethird

floorandirushtoanotherreceptiondesk,thisonestaffedbynursesinna一vy

uniforms.

“canihelpyou?”asksoneofficiousnursewithamyopicstare.

“myfather,raymondsteele.he’sjustbeenadmitted.he’sinor4,ithink.”

evenasisaythewordsiamwillingthemnottobetrue.

“letmecheck,misssteele.”

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inod,notbotheringtocorrectherasshegazesintentlyathercomputer

screen.

“yes.he’sbeeninforacoupleofhours.ifyou’dliketowait,i’llletthemknow

thatyou’rehere.thewaitingroom’sthere.”shepointstowardalargewhite

door,helpfullylabeledwaitingroominboldbluelettering.

“isheokay?”iask,tryingtokeepmyvoicesteady.

“you’llha一vetowaitforoneoftheattendingdoctortobriefyou,ma’am.”

“thankyou,”imutter—butinsideiamscreaming,iwanttoknownow!

iopenthedoortorevealafunctional,austerewaitingroom,wheremr.

rodriguezandjoséareseated.

“ana!”mr.rodriguezgasps.hisarmisinacast,andhischeekisbruised

ononeside.he’sinawheelchairwithoneofhislegsinacasttoo.igingerly

wrapmyarmsaroundhim.

“oh,mr.rodriguez,”isob.

“ana,honey.”hepatsmybackwithhisuninjuredarm.“i’msosorry,”he

mumbles,hishoarsevoicecracking.

ohno.

“no,papa,”josésayssoftlyinadmonishmentashehoversbehindme.

wheniturn,hepullsmeintohisarmsandholdsme.

“josé,”imutter.andi’mlost—tearsfallingasallthetension,fear,and

heartacheofthelastthreehourssurface.

“hey,ana,don’tcry.”joségentlystrokesmyhair.iwrapmyarmsaroundhis

neckandsoftlyweep.westandlikethatforages,andi’msogratefulthatmy

friendishere.wepullapartwhensawyerjoinsusinthewaitingroom.mr.

rodriguezhandsmeatissuefromaconvenientlyplacedbox,andidrymy

tears.

“thisismr.sawyer.security,”imurmur.sawyernodspolitelytojoséand

mr.rodriguezthenmovestotakeaseatinthecorner.

“sitdown,ana.”joséushersmetooneofthevinyl-coveredarmchairs.

“sitdown,ana.”joséushersmetooneofthevinyl-coveredarmchairs.

“whathappened?”iask.“doweknowhowheis?whataretheydoing?”

joséholdsuphishandstohaltmybarrageofquestionsandsitsdown

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fishingtriptoastoria.wewerehitbysomestupidfuckingdrunk—”

mr.rodrigueztriestointerrupt,stammeringanapology.

“cálmate,papa!”josésnaps.“idon’tha一veamarkonme,”hecontinues.

“justacoupleofbruisedribsandaknockonthehead.dad...well,dad

brokehiswristandankle.butthecarhitthepassengersideandray...”

ohno,no...panicswampsmylimbicsystemagain.no,no,no.mybody

shuddersandchillsasiimaginewhat’shappeningtorayintheor.

“he’sinsurgery.weweretakentothecommunityhospitalinastoria,but

theyairliftedrayhere.wedon’tknowwhatthey’redoing.we’rewaitingfor

news.”

istarttoshake.

“hey,ana,youcold?”

inod.i’minmywhitesleevelessshirtandblacksummerjacketandneither

provideswarmth.gingerly,josépullsoffhisleatherjacketandwrapsit

aroundmyshoulders.

“shalligetyousometea,ma’am?”sawyerisbymyside.inodgratefullyand

hedisappearsfromtheroom.

“whywereyoufishinginastoria?”iask.

joséshrugs.“thefishing’ssupposedtobegoodthere.wewereha一vinga

boys’get-together.somebondingtimewithmyoldmanbeforeacademia

heatsupformyfinalyear.”josé’sdarkeyesarelargeandluminouswithfear

andregret.

“youcouldha一vebeenhurt,too.andmr.rodriguez...worse.”igulpatthe

thought.mybodytemperaturedropsfurther,andishiveroncemore.josé

takesmyhand.

“hell,ana,you’refreezing.”

mr.rodriguezinchesforwardandtakesmyotherhandinhisonegoodhand.

“ana,iamsosorry.”

“mr.rodriguez,please.itwasanaccident...”myvoicefadestoawhisper.

“callmejosé,”hecorrectsme.igivehimaweaksmile,becausethat’salli

canmanage.ishiveroncemore.

“thepolicetooktheassholeintocustody.seveninthemorningandtheguy

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sawyerreenters,bearingapapercupofhotwaterandaseparateteabag.

heknowshowitakemytea!i’msurprised,andgladforthedistraction.mr.

rodriguezandjoséreleasemyhandsasitakethecupgratefullyfrom

sawyer.

“doyou...?”sawyerasksmr.rodriguezandjosé.theybothshaketheir

heads,andsawyerresumeshisseatinthecorner.idunkmyteabaginthe

waterand,risingshakily,disposeoftheusedbaginasmalltrashcan.

“what’stakingthemsolong?”imuttertonooneinparticularasitakeasip.

daddy...pleaselethimbeokay.pleaselethimbeokay.

“we’llknowsoonenough,ana,”josésaysgently.inodandtakeanothersip.

itakemyseatagainbesidehim.wewait...andwait.mr.rodriguezwith

hiseyesclosed,prayingithink,andjoséholdingmyhandandsqueezingit

everynowandthen.islowlysipmytea.it’snottwinings,butsomecheap

andnastybrand,andittastesdisgusting.irememberthelasttimeiwaited

fornews.thelasttimeithoughtallwaslostwhencharlietangowent

missing.closingmyeyes,iofferupasilentprayerforthesafepassageof

myhusband.iglanceatmywatch:2:15heshouldbeheresoon.mytea

iscold...ugh!

istandupandpacethensitdownagain.whyha一ven’tthedoctorsbeento

seeme?itakejosé’shand,andhegivesmineanotherreassuringsqueeze.

pleaselethimbeokay.pleaselethimbeokay.timecrawlssoslowly.

suddenlythedooropens,andweallglanceupexpectantly,mystomach

knotting.isthisit?

christianstridesin.hisfacedarkensmomentarilywhenhenoticesmyhand

injosé’s.

“christian!”igaspandleapup,thankinggodhe’sarrivedsafely.theni’m

wrappedinhisarms,hisnoseinmyhair,andi’minhalinghisscent,his

warmth,hislove.asmallpartofmefeelscalmer,stronger,andmore

resilientbecausehe’shere.oh,thedifferencehispresencemakestomy

peaceofmind.

“anynews?”

ishakemyhead,unabletospeak.

“josé.”henodsagreeting.

“christian,thisismyfather,josésenior.”

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“mr.rodriguez—wemetatthewedding.itakeityouwereintheaccident,

too?”

josébrieflyretellsthestory.

“areyoubothwellenoughtobehere?”christianasks.

“wedon’twanttobeanywhereelse,”mr.rodriguezsays,hisvoicequiet

andlacedwithpain.christiannods.takingmyhand,hesitsmedownthen

takesaseatbesideme.

“ha一veyoueaten?”heasks.

ishakemyhead.

“areyouhungry?”

ishakemyhead.

“butyou’recold?”heasks,eyeingjosé’sjacket.

inod.heshiftsinhischair,butwiselysaysnothing.thedooropensagain,

andayoungdoctorinbrightbluescrubsenters.helooksexhaustedand

harrowed.

ohno...allthebloodseemstodisappearfrommyheadasistumbletomy

feet.

“raysteele,”iwhisperaschristianstandsbesideme,puttinghisarm

aroundmywaist.

“you’rehisnextofkin?”thedoctorasks.hisbrightblueeyesalmostmatch

hisscrubs,andunderanyothercircumstancesiwouldha一vefoundhim

attractive.

“i’mhisdaughter,ana.”

“misssteele—”

“mrs.grey,”christianinterruptshim.

“myapologies,”thedoctorstammers,andforamomentiwanttokick

christian.“i’mdoctorcrowe.yourfatherisstable,butinacriticalcondition.”

fuck.whatdoesthatmean?mykneesbucklebeneathme,andonly

christian’ssupportingarmpreventsmefromfallingtothefloor.

“hesufferedsevereinternalinjuries,”dr.crowesays,“principallytohis

diaphragm,butwe’vemanagedtorepairthem,andwewereabletosa一vehis

spleen.unfortunately,hesufferedacardiacarrestduringtheoperation

becauseofbloodloss.wemanagedtogethisheartgoingagain,butthis

remainsaconcern.however,ourgra一vestconcernisthathesufferedsevere

contusionstothehead,andthemrishowsthathehasswellinginhisbrain.

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stillwhilewemonitorthebrainswelling.”

braindamage?no.

“it’sstandardprocedureinthesecases.fornow,wejustha一vetowaitand

see.”

“andwhat’stheprognosis?”christianaskscoolly.

“mr.grey,it’sdifficulttosayatthemoment.it’spossiblehecouldmakea

completerecovery,butthat’singod’shandsnow.”

“howlongwillyoukeephiminacoma?”

“thatdependsonhowhisbrainresponds.usuallyseventy-twotoninety-six

hours.”

ohno...solong!

“caniseehim?”iwhisper.

“yes,youshouldbeabletoseehiminabouthalfanhour.he’sbeentakento

theicuonthesixthfloor.”

“thankyou,doctor.”

dr.crowenods,turnsandlea一vesus.

“well,he’salive,”iwhispertochristian.andthetearsstarttorolldownmy

faceoncemore.

“sitdown,”christianordersgently.

“papa,ithinkweshouldgo.youneedtorest.wewon’tknowanythingfora

while.”josémurmurstomr.rodriguezwhogazesblanklyathisson.“we

cancomebackthisevening,afteryou’verested.that’sokay,isn’tit,ana?”

joséturns,imploringme.

“ofcourse.”

“areyoustayinginportland?”christianasks.josénods.

“doyouneedaridehome?”

joséfrowns.“iwasgoingtoorderacab.”

“lukecantakeyou.”

sawyerstands,andjosélooksconfused.

“lukesawyer,”imurmurinclarification.

“oh...sure.yeah,we’dappreciateit.thanks,christian.”